Here's a good example of a composition written by one of you, Sara Hamou, 2 Bat. A. Take it as an example of how to write compositions for school assignments and for exams. Thank you, Sara, for allowing us to upload it.
SHOULD SMOKING BE FORBIDDEN IN PUBLIC PLACES? EXPAIN WHY.
Smoke-free laws are a controversial topic. People who smoke feel discriminated because they can't smoke in many places and non-smokers feel unprotected if they are forced to endure secondhand smoke.
Smoking in public places should be forbidden because non-smokers don't have to endure the smoke of other people. Smokers should respect non-smokers and they shouldn't impose their harmful habit.
It isn't nice to be eating while other people are smoking and they can't even feel the taste of food. In parks where children are supposed to play we can find buts and it isn't good for those children.
In conclusion, I think that tobacco should be forbidden in public places because it is a drug and it doesn't bring us anything good.