PAU EXAM COMPOSITIONS

I am uploading here a couple of compositions written by two of your classmates, Marta Ruíz and Alicia González. Both are well structured essays with hardly any grammar mistakes. Worth having a look at them. Thanks Marta and Alicia for allowing its publication.

                     

WHY DO SOME STUDENTS HAVE BEHAVIOURAL PROBLEMS?

It is common to see how the number of students with behavioural problems increases day after day. People try to solve these problems by expelling the kids, but this might be a bit complicated.

A lot of students behave rudely at school because that is what they see at home. Many children try to escape from a difficult situation by reflecting the same behaviour with other people.

Some of them may have been bullied when they were younger and then they decide to misbehave to protect themselves. Even though those would be good reasons to explain behavioral problems, a lot of kids just need to learn how to be polite.

In conclusion, I believe that most of the problems related to the students' behaviour appear because of previous experiences and a lot of them are misunderstandings, but there are cases of bad-mannered students, too.
                                                                        Marta Ruíz


WHY DO SOME STUDENTS EXPERIENCE BEHAVIOURAL PROBLEMS IN SCHOOLS?

Unfortunately, it is a fact that most of the classes have got disruptive students: people who tend not to respect the teacher or even their own classmates. The reasons are very diverse.

One of the most common reasons is the lack of affection or good education that these students receive from their parents at home. We can see that lots of them are the son or daughter of divorced parents.

Besides, the bad influences also play a significant role in this issue. A students without a strong personality can adopt behaviors of others in order to be accepted into a particular group.

We can conclude that, for all this, it is very important to establish good pillars in the children's education, since their first days. We should give them love and teach them to have a good personality in order to avoid future serious behavioural problems.
                                                             Alicia González


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